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I sit here shaking, beautiful,
Your words make my eyes cry, deep,
Last night i stayed awake and stared,
At that card you wrote, i can't sleep.

You're so perfectly,
PERFECT-for-me,
But i'm so perfectly...
confused.

I sit here wondering, beautiful,
If you sincerely mean what you say,
I'd like to think that we could trust eachother,
Enough to make this all okay.

But i'm scared that this will happen again,
That i'll lose you after all this time,
I thought that you'd stay true, you know,
I thought that maybe, you'd be mine.

I sit here crying, beautiful,
As i think about everything we've been through,
So much heartbreak and pain, out in the rain,
You can't see i'm crying, but it's true.

You're so perfectly,
PERFECT-for-me,
But i'm so perfectly...
confused.

I wish i could make things better,
28 days and we'd be together,
But i'm wishing i could understand,
Why it was, that night...
you took his hand.




And i'm sorry baby if i sound a mess,
But i'm tired and sad and a little distressed,
I love you so much, yes, you already knew....
Baby, now Jaymee...i'd give my whole world, for you.
©2008-2009 ~the-samantha-ashlee
:iconthe-samantha-ashlee:

Author's Comments

I wish you loved me.


As much as i loved you.


But truth be heard...


Somehow, i still do.


:tears:

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:iconastarinthemaking:
thats poem is so sweet, i feel like crying because of it ^v^

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:iconplymouthtardis:
To be so far away from someone you love is one of life's greatest pains.
You capture it wonderfully with your words.
Beautiful, I'm sitting here almost crying. :happycry:

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This World is full, So full of crashing bores; And I must be one, 'cos no-one ever turns to me to say, "Take me in your arms, take me in your arms and love me." ~ Morrissey
:iconthe-samantha-ashlee:
Awhh :hug: Thank You

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In her smile & in her soul & the way she makes every rotten little thing about life seem like its gonna be ok...Great Romances Of The 20th Century
:iconthe-samantha-ashlee:
Thank You So Much.
It definately difficult.
I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
It's gfreat to know you can relate.
:hug: Awwh :)

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In her smile & in her soul & the way she makes every rotten little thing about life seem like its gonna be ok...Great Romances Of The 20th Century

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