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A million miles between us,
But it doesn't seem that far,
Two hearts, two hands, one sky to share,
Let's find ourselves a star.

And at night time when you're crying,
Look into the blackened sky and smile,
Knowing that somewhere out there,
There is something worth your while.

The distance means to me, nothing,
When a heart like yours is of existance,
So far away seems nothing now,
I'll prove to you my persistance.

I'll be waiting when your world crashes down,
For you to be in my arms again,
I'll be waiting for you, baby girl,
When your world comes to an end.
©2008-2009 ~the-samantha-ashlee
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:iconarnorath:
this is nice, real nice. i love all the astronomical metaphors you weave throughout - great use of a recurring theme to lend coherency to the piece. you use some interesting rhythmic patterns in places, but all in all it works well.

i like the first stanza the best.

==Arn==

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lazy perfectionist
:iconthe-samantha-ashlee:
Wow, thank you so much :) :heart:

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In her smile & in her soul & the way she makes every rotten little thing about life seem like its gonna be ok...Great Romances Of The 20th Century
:iconarnorath:
you're welcome :)

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lazy perfectionist
:iconseji3000:
This is one of the most sensational poems I have ever read!
:iconthe-samantha-ashlee:
Thank you so much!

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In her smile & in her soul & the way she makes every rotten little thing about life seem like its gonna be ok...Great Romances Of The 20th Century

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